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Always remember, my dear.
Always remember those times we shared.
Those times in the sun, those times we were together.
Always remember the feelings we shared.

Always remember, because I will never forget.
I originally wrote this randomly a few weeks ago for a song on Popmundo. I don't write poetry or anything much coz I'm not very good at it, but I just thought I'd upload this here!
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Silverlegends Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Charming!

It fits Angel so well...
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KoudelkaW Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Angel?

Vampire Angel, or another Angel?
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Silverlegends Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My Angel XD
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KoudelkaW Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Oh haha :XD: My mind was on Buffy's Angel coz I was watching that at the time I replied :XD:
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Silverlegends Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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chibimax Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Nice poem! it let me remember the fun we had on msn XD
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KoudelkaW Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
:XD:
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Zenith-AzuraTiger Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
I really like it xD I mean it doesn't necessarily follow a specific format but that's okay. =D Sometimes it's nice to do just freeform stuff. And simple is always nice. that way you don't have it cluttered up with frilly words. It's short, sweet and to the point. I gueeeess the only thing I might say is that you put shared in there twice and perhaps could have put in dared for the first one if you wanted to. Anyways, it's still good and you should submit more. You have very interesting thoughts and I think you could be very good at poetry. You are a good writer so why not? It's an excellent way to express your feelings too so .. if you ever need to vent, I totally think poetry helps with that too. xD It definitely helps me on occasion.
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KoudelkaW Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Wahahah well I only wrote it the once :XD: I can't usually think of what to write for poetry, but I really wanted to put something in the lyric section of the game, coz I could lol. It's suppose to be a thing for my character's son's girlfriend (I have my main character, and she has 3 kids :XD: ) only she hasn't actually seen it yet coz the song hasn't been released :XD:

Soooo yeah mostly it was just 'write whatever the heck my brain thinks of' :XD:
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Zenith-AzuraTiger Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
hahah well it's all good anyways!
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